PHILIP LAWRENCE
Script Services
With 18+ years writing for screen, stage and audio—including EastEnders, Casualty, Doctor Who plus original series and movies—I know what makes a script sing and I'm thrilled to now be offering the benefit of my experience.
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I’ve completed script editing courses with Philip Shelley and Lucy V Hay, and I’ve provided feedback for Pride Reads, The London Screenwriters Festival and countless emerging writers.
My notes are honest, constructive, and always sensitive—because I know what it’s like to be on the receiving end. But my priority is to help you write the best script you can.
What I can offer
Logline, pitch or synopsis (up to 5 pages)
Let me help get your logline, pitch or synopsis submission ready with emphasis on tone, character and story.
£75-£100 written report
£65-80 by zoom (one hour)
Short film script (up to 30 pages)
Comprehensive script analysis including what’s working, what needs work, structure, plot, character, dialogue and typos.
£120 for a written report
£100 by zoom (one hour)
TV Pilot (up to 65 pages)
Comprehensive script analysis including what’s working, what needs work, structure, plot, character, dialogue and typos.
£160 for a written report
£140 by zoom (one hour)
Feature Script (up to 120 pages)
Comprehensive script analysis including what’s working, what needs work, structure, plot, character, dialogue and typos.
£200 for a written report
£180 by zoom (one hour)
I am also happy to discuss bespoke deals and development packages.
What others have said
Mark Bowsher - writer and director
"Phil's an absolute joy to work with. Comprehensive, not holding back, but ultimately supportive. Thorough enough for me to work out some of the line-by-line changes, but not overwhelmingly nitpicky."